That’s some feedback for Mr. Husky, who posted his resume over here. As this gentleman is looking to change paths, a functional format is highly recommended. Also, his accomplishments need some work, and for an engineer, this can be demonstrated with leadership, efficiency, problem-solving, etc.

For tips of the material discussed in my feedback, here’s a video on writing a resume with the functional format.

And here’s ideas on how to write solid accomplishments.